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Open Window

Writer: Cale Montoya
Cale Montoya
17 hours ago
1 min read

Hello friends! Super short this week!


I wrote this poem a few days ago to depict my love for breezes blowing through open windows. It is rich with imagery. Let me know which line is your favorite! (Let's get that comment section bumpin')


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"Open Window"


As my feet dangle out the window, 

Waiting for fresh oxygen molecules to nibble 

The dead from my skin,

I smell the absence of my apartment—

And oh, it makes me hungry for a golden platter of more sun.


Meanwhile, the wind instructs a ballroom dance class 

In the strands of my ruffled hair. 

And the sound of the earth exercising 

Finds my window pane through trees doing zumba

And birds doing cardio.


I sit on my hands like a kindergartner waiting for 

Their reward after gathering boxtops. 

But in this case: I've gathered anxieties

To exchange them for a calm reassurance.

It never was a "fair" trade, was it?


So here I am, with nothing to offer the world 

Except for my swaying feet and childish posture—fueled by

Uncertainty.

And in return, the world takes my contribution and feeds me 

Tranquility.


Funny how an open window can do that to you.


-Cale Kenneth Montoya


Original Painting by Henri Matisse
Original Painting by Henri Matisse

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